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Aug. 7th, 2005 | 11:13 am
posted by: millyfan in weepyukes

Story Or Series Title: "The Butterfly and His Spider" http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2522249/1/

Fandom: Trigun

Culprit Author's Name: R.S.Azalea http://www.fanfiction.net/u/298425/

Full Name (plus titles if any): Vash

Full Species(es): Possessed canon character weepy uke

Hair Color (include adjectives): Same as in canon but subject to change (for now, it's a WIP)

Eye Color (include adjectives): Same as in canon but subject to change (for now, it's a WIP)

Unusual Markings/Colorations: He blushes a lot easier than canon Vash.

Special Possessions (if any): Stereotypical virginity, if that's a possession, and an endless supply of tears.

Annoying Origin: The mind of someone who thinks Trigun and Gravitation are one and the same

Annoying Connections To Canon Characters (or pairing if canon character): Wolfwood x Vash.

Annoying Special Abilities: He's like a wangst machine. An impossibly beautiful wangst machine that makes Wolfwood and himself act out of character.

Other Annoying Traits: "fragile and handsomely pretty" This is NOT an anime-incarnation of Gackt, fangirl. > _ <

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

Vash broke into tears, he was sobbing there in Nicholas’s arms, he was locked in them and that’s where he wanted to be. After sometime Nicholas’s hand moved Vash’s chin and lifted his head so they would meet with each other’s eyes. He leaned down and their lips met, for the first time Vash had ever been kissed. The kiss was timid from Vash and softly from Nicholas. They separated, they stared at each other and as though they had read each other’s minds Vash grabbed Nicholas and pulled him towards him, their kiss started to get more intense both of them trying to grab more than they could get. Getting rid of cloths rubbing each other’s bare bodies against each other, at first Vash was embarrassed but soon forgot because he noticed that his spider was trying to eat him with kisses, with lust, maybe even love. Passion was consuming them Vash didn’t want it to end; he could regret it if it ever did. He would cherish every moment of it. He would regret the moment Nicholas’s hands stopped touching his body giving him pleasure taking him to the world where they only belong. They had become one and one would stay as long as possible, Vash letting Nicholas take him to another place where they would give each other eternal torture and happiness. Both seeking for the same thing but one of them wanted more than the other, Vash grasp him closer as if afraid if he would leave. They fought all resistance for it to end until they couldn’t hold the peak anymore and then like a wave all solitude, grief and frustration left. Vash for the first times in years fell asleep with out any nightmares but hope to next day. Nicholas embraced him the whole night both of them secure fearing nothing as long they had each other.

Comments {4}


From: sacredarrow
Date: Aug. 7th, 2005 08:30 pm (UTC)

Sorry for random OT comment, but how is Gackt fragile? .-.

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He's not, but pretty.

Lazy Daisy

From: millyfan
Date: Aug. 7th, 2005 08:31 pm (UTC)

I was referring to the "small and pretty" comment. LOL :D

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Re: He's not, but pretty.


From: sacredarrow
Date: Aug. 7th, 2005 08:54 pm (UTC)

Well he isn't small, skinny, maybe, but certainly not small. He's 5'11 and has t3h magnum! *drools* I <3 the magnum...

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From: anonymous
Date: Aug. 10th, 2005 01:43 pm (UTC)

I'm weeping in disgust at this fanfic. It's ... awful!!

Anyway, Gackt isn't really "small" or "fragile" ... he's just skinny. Damn, I wonder who his personal trainer is. Do you think his personal trainer understands English?

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